In class did an autobiography about us and the things we love, where we want to go, where we live and so much more. Our teacher Miss J thought it was a good idea to get to know each other so we can work together better and most importantly brighten up our empty walls!
Hi Jakob, I really like how you kept your poem simple and didn't over complicate it. You had a nice, clear voice which made it easy to hear. I like the way you laid out your writing which makes it look really neat and nice, I didn't know your fears until now. I'm scared of drowning as well, you did a really good job on your artwork.
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Thanks for the comment Mary
DeleteHi Jakob I really like your autobiography Poem. I like farming too and I'm scared of drowning. maybe next time you could speak a bit louder good job. you should check out my one.
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