Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Lake Brunner School in Moana, near Greymouth, NZ.
Hi I like how you put the fire in an how the man were scared.But maybe you can put more time and detail in it and I also liked how you did the noises
Thanks for the comment Shaine, We only had 20 minutes to record and edit so thats why it isn't super detailed but I will try to put more detail in to the next video I do.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi I like how you put the fire in an how the man were scared.
ReplyDeleteBut maybe you can put more time and detail in it and I also liked how you did the noises
Thanks for the comment Shaine, We only had 20 minutes to record and edit so thats why it isn't super detailed but I will try to put more detail in to the next video I do.
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