As he took the long walk towards his cell he saw the other inmates sitting in their corners some even crying. Seeing these crying souls made him regret hitting his daughter and now he was going to be exiled for 4 years. He caught glimpse of a prison guard beating a inmate and he made it to his cold, dark and moist cell that he would be in for the next 4 years.
Sorry if this is a low quality piece of writing but we only had 5 minutes to write a paragraph about a character we had created.
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