The stink was so horrible that it made my eyes water and my sweat glands spew out all the sweat the could. It was only lit by my torch that was on low battery. The crumbling walls made me feel like is was gonna die down here. The water was home to god knows what and hopefully I wouldn’t learn what lurked in the murky drain water. The mice and cockroaches scrambled around my feet as I tried to find a minimally sanitized area where I could live.
It might have a few mistakes as we only had 5 minutes to write comment if it is good or if there is anything I could change or work on. We were writing a paragraph that would describe a setting
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